As i explained in my reflective paper, the first draft of my Textual Analysis was very repetitive, and all it really did was summarize. here’s one example of a paragraph that was nothing but summarizing, and the editor caught it to help me find those places to change them. it wasn’t until I went to go talk to Mr. Moore that i fully grasped the idea of the paper, and how exactly I needed to interpret what the author was saying. You can also see how I kept using the word “really” to try to emphasize my point. I didn’t realize how many times I used the word until my editor pointed it out to me. That was one of the first things I fixed when I went back to write my paper.